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Review:wonweasley says:
It's decided: Moody is my favourite character in this story -- possibly in the whole Harry Potter universe. "But you have the strategic advantage of using magic." Gold, just gold. I don't know how you manage to characterise him so well - not only canonically, but with your own flavour that effortlessly fits with the genre you're working in. Seriously, it's a tricky job and you are nailing it.

The scene in North's place had me on edge. I think the contrast between the perfectly decorated house and the horrifying basement was described in enough detail to get a real sense of how messed up people are, and how easily they can hide it. The dude (whether he's North or not) really creeps me out, but I'm so keen to know more about him. And to find out all this Priestess business. Exciting!

And finally I just adore the relationship that's forming between Aislin and Remus, the fact that he's starting to feel more comfortable around her. It just makes me happy because I feel like if there's anything I want in life, it's for Remus Lupin to be happy. (It's unhealthy. I know.)

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm having lots of fun writing Moody, and I'm glad he reads well!
I tried to make the basement scene just gross enough to be unsettling, without being so awful that it comes off as if I'm trying to be shocking just for the fun of it. That's definitely the point I want to make with North though, that as normal as somebody might look, you never know what's on the inside.
The friendship between Aislin/Remus is definitely going to develop more over the course of the story. I really like writing about them because their personalities are so different, but play so well off each other!

Thanks for reviewing, next chapter is in the works!


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