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This was such a beautiful chapter! I think the simplicity and the short length of your chapters make them so wonderful. And you are very good at keeping Ron's emotions simple as they always are. So transparent and easy to know! You have mastered his character. :)

Dumbledore! I find him awfully hard to write so I have never dared to do so, but you did the job very carefully and nicely. He was almost cannon, especially his dialogue.
I I believe Harry will need his friends more than most, though I venture to say he has chosen them well. Thjs was so. canon of him!

I also love the events you choose. They fit together perfectly as a whole piece of writing and still each seems a little bit different than the other. I can't wait to see what more you have for us! :D

Ashwini

Author's Response: Hi there! Nice to hear from you again :) I appreciate that you continue to come back to this story and review the chapters. I am hoping to have another chapter up soon-ish.

I completely agree with you about Dumbledore! He is so terribly difficult to get right, and is one of those characters that I shied away from writing for a long time. I still limit his appearances, but I'm glad you found him to be close to canon.

I worry that this collection will get a bit stale and that the chapters are going to start being too similar, so I'm glad that you haven't found that to be the case (at least not yet).

Thanks again for your review :D


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