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Review:EllaShanti says:
Okay, please work. gazillionth time lucky. THIS IS THE ONE.

Hellooo my lovely author! Sorry I haven't reviewed for a few chapters, I am officially and completely addicted. However I did feel a little guilty once I hit chapter 8, so here I am.

Damn harry locking his employees up and stealing their wands. He is great.

I have to say, I thought Elizabeth was going to find out there (about the whole superhero and possibly the magic thing too) and got very excited, but no. I suppose you're probably going to torture your poor obsessed reader for a while with that. Ah well, such is life.

Three questions (which I guess you have license to answer mysteriously)

Is anything going to come of the whole premonition thing? Is there some secret there that's going to come out? I'm intriiigued.

Are we going to meet Cute Boy or Rebecca's mum? I'm kinda hoping for CB to turn up, at least :P

And...Kieran? Rebecca? *eyebrow wiggle* Anyway, I'm heading over to chapter 9 now, so farewell for the moment.

Love your friendly neighbourhood spi- um, reviewer.

P.s. I KNOW I'M SO EXCITED FOR RISE OF ELECTRO AHHH. I love both Tobey Maguire and Andrew G. Spidey forever.

Author's Response: This IS the one! Yay! o/
Helo lovely ellie! It's absolutely fine, I'm glad I've got you hooked. It shows I'm not entirely failing, so yay for addiction! (to reading. I'm not condoning other types of addiction).
I know right?! Gosh darn it Harry, ya lil cutie.
Ooh, did you? Nah, she's clueless. (or is she...? ;) ) Yes, I am. Sorry about that.
(thank you for the licence. I'm probably going to exercise it)
Erm... I guess so. I mean, it's part of a spiderweb of clues I've left to make something obvious that comes to light later... but it's something very subtle only the most obsessed fans of HP would make (ask again for more info after you've read chapter 11 if you want to know explicitly what it is). Also, I use it as a way of building suspense later on. :D
I can say the affirmative- a bit- to the first, and also the affirmative- sort of, in a way you wouldn't expect- to the second. Sorry for playing my mysterious licence, but I don't wanna spoil any big surprises for you :)
And... Keiran and Rebecca turn out... exactly how I would expect them to.
*vagueness reaches new levels*
HAVE FUN IN CHAPTER NINE
I thank you, as Son of Odin and God of- cough, cough. GodDESS of writing. Obviously. ;)
PS Spiderman in a week and six days. Not that I'm counting or anything. I'm impressed you can hold both of them dear to you... but I never was keen on Tobey, so. Personal taste, I guess. But YES, Electro looks like he's gonna be SO cool and I can't wait to see Spidey fight him!


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