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Review:ladyrae says:
Oh such much wow. Narcissa is a total psychopath.

This chapter was a little marred by the fact that I read it on April Fool's Day and the site was changed, but I didn't want to wait to read it, so I had to read about Salami having feelings for Rainne and Peanut Butter having Jelly help them. A bit odd, but worth it to read it quickly.

I'm definitely conflicted about the Ben situation. On the one hand, he met this great girl, fell for her, and then realized that she came with so much, and he can't really deal with it. On the other hand, she needs him/someone. I find myself kinda wishing he was more like Pettigrew and then I'd expect him to maybe run scared, but I don't know about Ben. It'll be interesting to see how this new death affects them, and how Sirius takes the fact that it was his cousin.

Can't wait to see Remus' opinions. I may love that character too much. I think they could bond a lot over their issues, and that could seem to be the more apparent threat to Ben (and Sirius). Even their fighting shows how may secrets they already share and how alike they are. I could see Ben finding that more threatening than Sirius trying to stay away.

Anyway, can't wait for the next update. Wonderful chapter!

Author's Response: Oh wow that must have been a very interesting read. I kind of wish I'd seen that.

That's honestly exactly how I feel about him too. Recently I've been thinking of revamping this story and actually replacing him with Peter, but if I do it won't be until I'm completely done with it. And I probably won't want to then.

You have some really interesting views on the characters --that may or may not be accurate, I won't say!

Thanks for leaving a review. Hopefully the next chapter will be up in about a week. Can't wait to hear your thoughts on it!


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