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Review:My Name Does Not Matter says:
Well, that was quick and easy to imagine well done on that front. Again seeing your personality. As a guy it is important that women know that there are a lot of guys out there who don't think like that so that's all i'll say on the matter. On the subject of the story i like that she had her huge a*s blowout and quit. But this completely removes any source of information as to where the ministry is on finding or capturing her. I half expected you her to out her secret in front of them all then apparate out. Thinking ahead, if i was harry i'd think about asking to hire her in a more influential role, as Keiran he probably shouldn't talk to any women for a while, Ryland has lost an amazing colleague on a work and personality front so he'll be wondering how he'll ever find a replacement who might live close to her standards. Jess will be stuck without the one colleague who helped her. All women and men in the departments will be talking about that for ages. Rubina Selwyn will unaccountably hear about it and i kinda want her to go to Rebecca's flat and talk to her again. Seriously there are so many tangents that could happen from this point. OK i'm done.
Sheesh where did all that come from right?
Looking forward to the rest.

Author's Response: Yup and... I'm glad it was! It's easy to see, I think, when you know the writer. Yes, it does do that- well spotted :) Could be a major plot point... (you can't Apparate in or out of the ministry, just fyi :P)
Remember what Selwyn said, though- she doesn't want her old life back, and, by extension, Rebecca. She likes the life she's living, although I'm sure she sometimes regrets her decisions. SO MANY TANGENTS and I'm hoping I chose the best one. :D
Sheesh, I know right? I can't match all that!
:)


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