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Review:TidalDragon says:
I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter. You struck a nice balance between the introductions and interactions with the Weasleys (+ Harry and Hermione) and the inner turmoil and emotion that Sadie was experiencing. As before, your handling of the descriptions and inner thoughts of hers was very well done. I thought the memory of her deciding to learn to sign was an excellent inclusion that really helped to underline the rest of what you expressed about her, both in this chapter and earlier.

Harry's thoughts were also a nice touch. I am interested to see how their relationship develops and whether they will ultimately reach a point where they discuss their traumas - the losses of their families and homelessness/hated-ness at the Dursleys.

Hermione's contribution was also a delight.

Author's Response: Back again, though I'm not exactly keeping to my one review a day plan. Still, I'm trying. My word count for NaNo is pretty pathetic at the moment as well.

I was really worried about this chapter. Introduction chapters can be so hard to write! I worried it would just be boring and not really further the plot.

I'll admit that the memory of her learning to sign is my favorite part of this chapter, so I'm glad you liked it's inclusion.

I'm excited to get going more on the relationship between Harry and Sadie. As for discussing their trauma...I'm still wondering about that myself. Neither one of them tend to share very well, so I'll have to see if they get to it.

Thanks so much! These reviews are wonderful to come back to.


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