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Review:potterfan310 says:
Hi, Hi, Hi!!

I am very excited right, if you haven't of guessed, either that or I'm just cold :p

I love that Astoria wants to meet up with Rose and so far I love how you've characterised her as a kind, caring, loving person rather than some frosty, evil person.

Dom dating, well that's new! Is there where Dom was/with when everything kicked off?

Scorpius standing up to Chelsea = happy me. Good on him and poor Rosie for having to deal with her. Although did you mean Amy as you said Chelsea got suspended? Either way I'm happy he stood up for Rose.

Pfft, haha. Go Sarah, lol. Teenage boys, so predicable. Love the way she went about it.

One thing - try writing the numbers instead of putting the number.

Aww, Rose is certainly lucky to have them all. I have conflicted feelings about Scorpius right now, on one hand he does need to think about everything but on the other I want him and Rose together!!

Feels everywhere!!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

*Squishy hugs*

- Potterfan310

Soph xx

Author's Response: Hi hi hi!

I like to make Astoria friendly and warm... Draco changed after the war and grew up and I wanted his choice in a mate to support that :)

Yes, that is where Dom was when everything kicked off, the one time she decides to date and it all kicks off!

Chelsea got suspended and maybe I didn't make it clear for how long, although three weeks have passed by the time the second paragraph rolls around. Sorry for the confusion!

Oh yes, teenage boys and their hormones, almost as important to the story as the teenage girls and their hormones!

I keep forgetting to write the numbers out fully. it's such a bad habit!

Scorpius is a conflicted character right now... his feelings are there, but so is the feeling of betrayal and hurt.


*Squishy hugs right back*

-Sarita :) xxx

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