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Review:evil little devil says:
I'm here from the review the person above thread from the common room :)
I'm not going lie, I picked this story off your author's page because of the banner. That facial expression! So perfect. Especially in the face of quiche.
And the story was as fun as the banner! Baking dark marks onto pies! Oh my gosh, I can picture this so perfectly in my head and it's the most hilarious image.
This story was so ridiculous, but in the most perfect way. And you wrote it in such a way that it could theoretically be realistic that Barty was thinking about baking the whole way through his classes, while still pulling off the Moody persona on the outside.
It did drag a little bit in the middle for me, although that could just be because I'm a bit tired, but then it picked right back up again towards the end. The quadratic equation of doom! I thought I'd managed to forget that fiend, but I feel like it's one of those things that will stick with you your whole life :P
This was such a fun oneshot to read! Hilarious and delicious :)

Author's Response: Hello! Why thank you haha, I think the banner is probably the reason most people read this. :p Barty Crouch's face twitch in GoF was just too good to not put on a banner for a food-related story. :D

I'm glad you like the Dark Mark pies and the sheer ridiculousness that is this fic. Of course realistic - after all, there is nothing in this story that expressly contradicts canon. It happened I tell you.:p

The dragging bit might have been when Barty's own life was dragging, maybe his own frustration with the television industry really made it onto the page lol. Anyway, I'm glad it picked back up for you, and that you appreciated the quadratic equation haha. Thanks so much for reading, and for your review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!


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