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Review:HEG says:

This story is so dark. It is so mysterious, wonderful and marvellous. I really loved it. Your characterisation of Old Voldy is brilliant. He is persistent, impatient and most importantly - evil! He is sort of torturing the sorting hat in order for him to get information about his 'species'.

The sorting hat's song was brilliant. Every line rhymed and fitted in. I love to read a sorting hat song. Most people just leave it out and get on with the sorting but I think it is more talented to put in your own song. It is very difficult though. I always do a sorting hat's song and think it's hard to find the right words for each line so you've done that very well.

It's interesting when the sorting hat tells Voldemort about the four founders and their story and interesting to see Voldemorts reaction. You've got Him into character when he immediately suspects that the sorting hat is lying. Well done. Oh my goodness! The sorting hat is a Horcrux! That is such a good plot idea. I really love it and so believable too. I love plot twists like this. They really make you think weather the sorting hat COULD have been a Horcrux.

Good job and very well written!

HEG :)

Author's Response: Hello! :)

I'm really glad you liked this! I wrote it quite some time ago, so it's always exciting to get a review which brings me back to it. I was a little worried about writing Voldy because he's so distinctive and frightening, but I'm quite pleased you liked how he was written. You're right, he does seem to torture the Sorting Hat - and I wouldn't expect anything else from him.

I love reading sorting hat songs as well, and couldn't resist the chance to write one even if the story didn't really need it. I'm pleased you thought I did an okay job with it.

I'm glad you liked the story of the founders and Voldy's reactions to it - and how it's a Horcrux! That was one of my crazier ideas but actually sort of fit quite well with how the Sorting Hat has its own personality and agency. And who knows, maybe it could be! :P

Thanks so much for the review! :)

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