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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hi!

So I was going through reading the entries that are already submitted into the Second Person POV challenge, just to get an idea of the different styles of second person, and just wow.

This story was so great, I loved the way you used repetition to instill her feelings in us. I loved the voice that you wrote this in, and how it flowed from beginning to end. I think it really fit well, and was an impressive story.

I absolutely loved the way that you ended it, that last paragraph is just so powerful. I want to go listen to that song forever and ever now, just because I like the idea of a lion-hearted girl (and how well fitting with a gryffindor).

Brilliant job, hon! I loved reading this!

Good luck in the challenge, you're definitely tough competition!

xoxo Sarah

Author's Response: Thank you so much! At the risk of tooting my own horn I am really happy with the way this turned out - I don't normally use second person and I was surprised how well it works. Thank you for reading and I hope your own entry goes well!

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