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Review:Lululuna says:
Hello! :) Reviving Slytherin review tag here... :P

Aw, this was just so adorable! I like how it seems compliant with the Dominique and Teddy from 'The Worst' and shed some light on what they might have been like during happier times. 'The Worst' shows Teddy helping Dom through, well, the worst time in her life, but this sheds a happier, more liberated light on their relationship.

I really like how you explained what had happened with Victoire and how that led to Dom and Teddy getting together. The explanation made a lot of sense here, and I really liked how the fact that he had dated Victoire remained firmly in the past, yet certainly wasn't forgotten. Also, I love how they were friends for several years, and really got along so well as friends. It's clear in the story how well they know one another, down to Teddy knowing Dom's favourite book. Also, what was the book out of curiosity? :) (if you have one picked out, that is).

I wish I could be a wizard and travel to Malaysia every month! :P The beach sounded really amazing and I loved the way you described it. The scene was a wonderful escape from reality and for them to be isolated, and I really liked how playful the two of them were together as well.

This was such a cute story, and a joy to read! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am glad you liked this. This story is part of my head canon for Teddy/Dom and so it is kind of compliant to The Worst yeah. I am glad you liked how the couple was shown during such happy times =)

It's nice to know that you liked my explanation of Victoire and the past =) I love friends-turned-lovers kind of stuff so this was nice for me to write xD The book was definitely something related to the Wizarding War II (Harry's fight with Voldemort) as my Dom loves reading stuff related to that xD

Haha I am currently in Malaysia right now but I have only gotten the chance to visit that island just once. But thank you for your lovely words, I'm glad the place descriptions sounded good =)


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