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Review:a reader says:
this story is really excellent, I'm really enjoying it so far, it's always refreshing to see a portrayal of astoria where she's got a brain! and draco as a human and a deatheater!
I'm a little confused on the timeline of this story though, why isn't astoria at hogwarts if it's spring of 1998?
I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Oh, wow. I see what you mean. I understand why you'd be confused--that's my fault. I think it only really explains the time thing in the italics in the first chapter. It *is* spring of '98, during Deathly Hallows. Astoria is home for of Easter holidays. Her interview with Draco takes place a few days before Harry and the gang get caught and taken to Malfoy Manor. But yeah, I can totally see the confusion with the timeline. My bad. Thanks for pointing it out! I'll definitely have to go in and try to clear that up.

Also, so glad that you're enjoying the story! *I* can't wait for you to read more, either. Posting a new chapter is my favorite :D Apart from getting kind reviews like this one, of course. That's lots of fun, too!

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!

--Penny


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