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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
I'm going to see if I can review yours before you can finish reading mine!

On that note, you have some great detail in this (which is an area that I constantly lack in, so it really stands out, and makes me a little jealous :p). I think it really sets the mood of the story, especially in the beginning. With poor Sadie sitting outside of a deli in the pouring rain, I already feel for her and already am connected to her. That's a ton to do in the first couple paragraphs.

I want to frown very harshly at that woman; it's not very nice to not even give the poor girl scraps!

I am happy that the odd woman found her, though! At least some people are kind. Aaand that woman is a witch!

I'm excited for what happens next!


Author's Response: Hehehe. I think you won that race. Especially considering I still haven't finished reading your wonderful story. I'm so behind on reading all sorts of things!

Thank you for your compliment! I'm blushing now. I'm not always sure I'm doing the detail right, so thank you for that. And to have you connect to Sadie already really makes me happy.

As for that woman, some people are just not very nice. But the old, odd woman might just be going to help her. :)

Thanks for reading! You are a great friend.

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