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Review:Hope F Moore says:
Hi, this was a good chapter, but I think it was a little out of character for Hermione to be as naive as she was, considering how much of the conspiracy she already suspected. It also didn't make any sense how the stupify and patrificous totalus didn't take full effect; they don't work like that (unless you have some explanation in the next chapter). And that's not exactly what I'd call a cliff-hanger, but it should be interesting to see her reaction. Oh, and I'm sorry, and I know that it's important to your story and it's supposed to be different from the book, but the point of the golden trio was to represent the other three houses, with Harry being Slytherin, Ron being Hufflepuff, and Hermione being RAVENCLAW, but they were all put in Gryffindor because they chose it (supposidely/subconciously), so it makes Hermione's relation to Godric Gryffindor. Anyway, yeah. Update soon.

Author's Response: I'm sorry for writing Hermione out of character. I will he going back and editing it. And as for the spells not working, there is an explanation. Remember how Hermione had difficulty casting a spell earlier? ;) Hermione's relation to Gryffindor was, and still is, something that I am not sure about. I might change it as I don't know if I really want to keep it. And I forgot about the trio representing the other Houses. And yes, I realize Hermione was being very naive. I will change that. Sorry. I kind of wrote the chapter in a rush, so I'm obviously going to change it. Thanks for the review.

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