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Review:FawkesFelicis says:
Hmm, smart move on Ginny's part to leave it hanging, smart of you as a writer! I like the format you're using, switching between time periods is hard to do!

Author's Response: Oh, thank you! Ginny's a smart, biscuit? Do the British have their own idiom for that? I don't know. But yes. I wanted to set it up so that it's clear that, unlike many people, Ginny is someone who can go head to head with Astoria, someone who is on her level. I wanted Astoria to respect Ginny, to some extent, but Astoria's respect doesn't come free. Ginny had to earn it. She's a lot sharper than Astoria generally expects Gryffindors to be (she is a Slytherin, after all. Bit of prejudice there).

I'm glad you like the format. Switching between time periods *is* hard, but I felt it was necessary to keep all the parlor scenes from getting stuffy. I don't like to stay in the same place too long. And so long as people are still interested and not distracted, I guess it's doing its job!

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate your taking the time.


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