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Review:Maelody says:
Hey! Sorry it took so long to get to this! Work and all, you know? :)

I love the names you use in this chapter! Xtra and Nother Xtra made me laugh, and boy do I wish I could hear how they actually talk! XD crazy! And scammers! I'm surprised Ivan tolerated them for so long lol.

She must have thought his eyes were gold because of the armor's reflection, right? ;) Though that whole lesson on gold was hilarious. I really do love Max! :D

Marty Stu is the BEST character EVER! ( obviously!) ;) I'm pretty sure I'm right on this, but the play on Mary Sue was great. :)

One correction I saw needed to be made, though very small, was, "“What? Why would I allow each of you two shillings when I only need one of you to tell me what I need to know.”" It should be a ? yeah? :)

This really is great. It's super original, it gets me laughing, and I love the topics it covers. They're great, and Max is just so snarky! You really excell in the comedy and that's what makes this so enjoyable! Super great job and I can't wait to read chapter three! :D

Author's Response: Oh, I understand! Sorry it took so long to respond!

Haha! I'm glad that you caught the Xtras. I only work on this story when I'm over-tired, and have to go back and reread all of the madness while I'm awake. ...the things that happen while I'm mildly dillusional... They provided some nice filler (and pointless) conversation!

I'm glad you enjoyed the lesson on gold ;) and Max!

Yes, you're right! Marty Stu is the male-version of a Mary Sue, and your reaction was exactly what I was going for!

Yes, it should be a question mark! Thank you!

Thanks so much!! This is really fun to write, but I think any comedy has to be credited to my sleepy-mind rather than my lucid mind!

-Rumpel


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