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Review:marauderfan says:
All right, here's another step closer to 100 ;)

The beginning is intriguing - just enough to raise questions, but certainly doesn't give anything away. Just enough to convey the feeling of guilt. And then back in time a little... Fred's funeral. Gah I get sad just thinking about it. I think you portrayed Josephine's feelings wonderfully though, and captures the post-war mindset of how, yeah it's nice that Voldemort is gone, but so are people's friends and family and that really hits close to home. Poor girl :(

This is really beautifully writtten, ,a great start to your story!

Author's Response: YOU GOT ME TO 100, YOU LOVELY, LOVELY, WONDERFUL PERSON, YOU! Honestly, your review-a-thon for me that was so immediate after I posted that status was one of the sweetest things I ever could have asked for. Thank you so much for helping me get to 100, and even more so for leaving a plethora of such wonderful reviews! :-D

Yay for intrigue! I'm glad I managed to balance the intro correctly! I always worry when trying to write even a small amount of mystery into a story, because that balance can be really hard to manage, so it's a great relief to hear this! And Fred... I know. :( His death is still just ridiculously upsetting, but I think it's a bit helpful when writing from Jo's perspective and trying to capture how she would feel! I'm glad you found her emotions well-done and realistic! Phew! ^.^

Ah, again, you're just so wonderful. Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a lovely review! And I'll see you soon in my next response! :-D *glomps*


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