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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW TAG!

It's been simply ages since I read a Marauders fic about all the Marauders, and even longer since I read a serious one. I am so excited!

This is a super interesting start! Everything is appropriately mysterious and cryptic, as is fitting for a first chapter, I think. Dumbledore really doesn't like telling people the whole picture, does he? I wonder if that aspect of his personality will come in later on in the story as well.

The character I'm most excited about is Mary. She's the only Ravenclaw, the only one who has no idea what's going on, and she's the only one who seems to be showing the correct emotions in this situation - I'd be terrified and confused, too! Boo all the Gryffindors for pitying her!

Hopefully, I'll be back soon for chapter two! Fantastic start, once again :)

Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it so much! I am very excited to continue writing about Mary, and getting back into the forums is a surefire way to make me write!

Thanks


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