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Review:marauderfan says:
Lol at Ron snoring like an angry bear. Ack, it's funny but it's distracing me from the fact that I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED and who died in the last chapter!! The suspense is killing me.

ok, I know I shouldn't find this so amusing because I'm about to find out unpleasant news about who died but I love Sir Podmore. Can he be included in every chapter? I love that he finds Harry dull, and that he is kind of a nobody but has a really high opinion of himself and points out that his friends are important knights of the Round Table. Hahaha... ok. I'm getting so sidetracked. I apologise for my attention span.

I love how the Muggle police force works together with the Aurors, that's quite cool. Also, I'm glad Harry made it his personal mission to track down Dolohov, after everything he did. Teddy and Andromeda would certainly have some peace. Also, I'm glad Harry visits Dudley and that they don't hate each other anymore. You are really enjoying making me wait to find out what happened though :p

Nooo! Ahh, I was worried it would be Lorcan, :( I can't believe Lorcan died, and ugh what a ghastly way to go. Poor guy. And Hugo a test subject... this story is so intense gahh! Sorry about my incoherent rambling - anyway this was a great chapter and I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for more.

Author's Response: Wahh!! I can't believe that I've taken MONTHS to come and give you a response! :( Fail!

Just like in the Books, Ron is a bit of a comedy relief. But because of the nature of this story, he won't be for long. Basically, what I did was give you a horrible false sense of security. Lol, I'm sorry.

Sir Podmore has been more of a hit than what I thought. Actually...he was just a tool in all this and now I feel like I need to add him a bit more.

I've always believed that Dolohov managed to escape after the Battle of Hogwarts and Harry's mission to bring him to justice. While I don't think he would've pretended to be a muggle, I think that Harry would've eventually caught up to him. Harry and Dudley's relationship is weird for my liking when it comes to Canon. I mean, JKR has stated that Harry visits and they sit around in silence while their kids play...but what when they get older? Wouldn't the children start not wanting to go visit their muggle cousin who hates magic? Unless they don't hate magic...? I had to make Harry put his differences aside with the Dursleys and at least acknowledge that Dudley did change and that he too needed to change and attempt to get along.

Yeah, it was indeed Lorcan and you're right, it was indeed ghastly! It fact, in my head and the notes that I have, his death is quite gruesome but I had to scale it down a bit due to ToS. And yes! Hugo here is definitely now a test subject so he's not in a very good position either.

Thank you so much for review this and once again sorry for taking forever to give you a reply!!

Until next time dearie!


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