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Review:Penelope Inkwell says:
Dude, what is up with super-happy cheerful Gawain? And I thought that he didnít like Draco? Has he been, like Imperiused or something?

Ooooh! FIELD TRIP!

Okay, so I love this broom youíve dreamed up. And I want it. Really, I just want any flying broom, but this one seems particularly snazzy. Poor Anaxandra never learned to fly? And her brother did? That is all kinds of unfair. I mean, itís bad enough that I canít fly, but sheís a witch. Itís, like, her unalienable right! I object on her behalf, and I really hope Draco teaches her.

Aaand she has only had icecream ONCE?! This is just tragic.

What did Draco see that made him dart away like that. My best guess would be that Astoria saw him with a strange girl and got the wrong (but hopefully right in the future) idea. But is it something worse than that? I have to read on and find out what the deal is with this abrupt exit. It must be pretty important, because it was looking like he might get some information out of Ana, so for him to give up that opportunity...I am so curious!

Itís really interesting how she seems to be able to do magic without a want. Wondering what the story is there. The Ministry did take her wand, didnít they? Did she get it back?

Poor girl, sheís been through a lot.

CC:

"Iíve told you once, and Iíll tell you again,Ē Gawain asserted, sitting down in his own chair and leaning forward on his elbows, then changing back to his overly cheery self, ďcall me Gawain.Ē

--when you say ďchanging back to his overly cheery selfĒ, I wasnít aware he had left it? At what point does that happen? Is it when heís saying, ďIíve tell you once and Iíll tell you again,Ē? Because when I was reading, I imagined him saying that in a joking manner, but thatís the only point I could find where it seemed like he might have slipped back into a harsher tone. MIght be good to clarify that. Thatís all Iíve got.

Another intriguing chapter! Looking forward to reading more :D

--Penny

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