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Review:HEG says:
Hello again!

I do love a Diagon Alley chapter, I don't know why - usually because the author comes up with lots of ideas for jokes and tricks to be in the Weasley's Wizard Wheezes. I find it hard to think of lots of new and exciting ideas so you've done a good job on that. :).

*grins* the opening paragraph is so realistic. I am actually I.gaining the scene of Hermione checking over each and every one book on the book list and approving them for Rose. I like the fact that the only thing Ron cares about is the price and the only thing that Hermione cares about is what the books actually are about. I think that the one thing you cod have done is put a little more description in for the character Angie.

All in all, I loved this chapter,

HEG :D

Author's Response: Hiya.

I like Diagon Alley chapters too and was particularly anxious to write this one, since year one had to start after my characters had visited Diagon Alley, as the epilogue took place after that. Glad you liked it too.

Thanks for the constructive criticism also. Like I said, description isn't exactly my strong point. *grins*


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