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Review:HEG says:
Hi there! I've decided to start reading this as it has been on my read list for quite a while.

Good start, you've got Roses character absolutely perfect. I can imagine Hermione and Rose having a discussion somewhere along those lines. I like the way you've had Hermione still complaining about S.P.E.W. and Rose saying that you've mentioned it numerous times before. That made me laugh!

Ooh so you've introduced Rose 's brother. I am guessing that is Hugo. Rose seems to get quite irritated by him. I can tell that Hugo and Rose don't share similar personalities. Hugo is certainly less studious like his father while Rose is more like her mother.

*laughs* Hugo is wanting to know about the Qudditch final but I guess he is just bored and wants an excuse to talk to Rose and annoy her a little on purpose. I am really interested in this chapter as there is a secret to be revealed. I wonder how it will come about and weather my theory will be right (or close).

The Daily Prophet has just arrived! I have a feeling the secret will be hidden in there. And I also have a feeling that Rita Skeeter has been spreading rumours. Ooh! Blackburn is a werewolf! I was right. Maybe she has some sort of connection with Remus Lupin? I don't know, that was just an idea. Anyway this is really interesting. It seems like Dora has spilled the beans.

I like the way you have shown Rose 's anger when reading the second article. It was really realistic. You really have a talent for making things seem realistic. Sometimes it even seems like I am watching a (awesome) film inside my head!

Keep it up!

HEG :)

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for such a long and detailed review. I wasn't expecting to find a review today at all, let alone such an awesome one, so thank you.

I'm glad you like Rose and wow, I can't believe you feel like you are watching a film. Description isn't exactly my strong point.

And yeah, younger siblings have to annoy older ones, don't they?

And yes, your theory was correct. *grins* Things are about to get nasty.

Thanks again for the review and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story.


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