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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Erica! This was everything I wanted to be and more :D

I really love the mix of characters you've got so far. I think you painted a good background of Taryn and her co-workers and their work relationships without having the first chapter being overloaded with informatiion. I'm definitely looking forward to learning more about them :)

I'm a little sad that you killed Dean Thomas! Could you not have picked Umbridge or someone awful? Poor Dean :( I do like that it gives Albus a personal involvement in the case, especially since Taryn has one in her need to prove herself to her boss.

I like the way you fitted the Wanderers in there and that it caused the first interaction between Taryn and Albus. Her confusion about the wand and his magic posessions was good too, I wonder if she'll mention it to the others.

Anyway, I thought this was an excellent first chapter, adding to my favourites and already eagerly awaiting the next one! And you're more han welcome for the help, it really was my pleasure :)

Dee x

Author's Response: Dee your review is just so squee worthy! Thank you so much for reading this and just for all the help and support that you have given me with this story. I promise you that I have not given up on this story at all and will hopefully be writing more for it soon! I'm really glad that you liked it! Thanks again for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~


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