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Review:marauderfan says:
Yep, had to keep reading, I couldn't stay away. It's probably a good thing you've never written any really long novels or I'd never leave my computer. Anyway, this chapter! Aww, the beginning... I really liked how Lily saw how her patients see her work, and really the whole other side of the coin there. (Other side of the Galleon? This is HP fanfic after all)

Lysander died?!? :'( I guess that's probably mentioned in the prequel story but GAH. So sad :(

wow, the whole flashback thing was INTENSE!! How have these students not been found out by any professors yet? Or... they have been discovered but people forgot? hm. But anyway, that mind magic pill at least explains why present-day Lily is having forgetting spells. (Meaning periods of time that she forgets, not that she's forgetting spell incantations, lol.) I am so curious what Kenna and Matthieu were up to and who they are and what they are doing now! Sitting in Azkaban? Taking over the world?

Nice integration of that quote, btw. Ha, I entered in the same challenge with a completely ludicrous story and I like yours far better, haha. I hope there is more of this story coming soon! Also, if you ever write OF you should absolutely write a mystery/thriller, you'd be SO good at it. Awesome work so far.

Author's Response: Wow you are too awesome to leave another review! What a lovely surprise! Thank you so so much - this review just made my entire week :) Haha the other side of the Galleon - I love that. Oh my goodness. Your compliment about original fiction just blew my mind. Eeee thank you!!
I like the way your mind works - I haven't started the next chapter, but I do have some ideas floating around...and there may be some answers about how these students can leave Hogwarts undetected (or remain out of trouble)...I'm glad I was able to work the quote in there ok haha. I absolutely loved the Princess Bride when I was little - so was completly thrilled to be part of that challenge. Ohh I'm definitely off to check out your entry right now!!

Thanks again for the super sweet surprise review :)






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