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Review:marauderfan says:
Puff review tag!

I realise this is a sequel and I haven't read the previous story, but this had no reviews so I wanted to give it some love! And I can tell you that even without reading the prequel, this stands on its own very well.

I love how you've charcterised Lily! I can already see her work ethic and perfectionism very evidently. Your attention to details is fantastic, how you mention the birds outside, and all the descriptions of the potion doing everything she doesn't want it to do. The details just make that scene so rich - and it really adds to Lily's narration as I imagine she is quite a detail oriented person (even if she forgot mint leaves in her potion once, whoops.)

The fluffy scene with Lorcan was cute :) Aw, he doesn't care that her hair is full of messy trial potions, he thinks she's lovely anyway. Lily's panic about her appearance was pretty amusig though lol.

BUT THE ENDING WHAT??? I mean, I know you love to end chapters with cliff hangers, after reading a few chapters of A Twist of Time ;) but this seriously hefjvhejfn Did the potions do something to her? Why is she losing her memory? Now the part about her having the ring for the rest of her life is making me panic because what if that's not very long? Aaa I need to go read the next chapter right now. Excellent chapter!!

Author's Response: KRISTIN! Aww thank you so much for such a wonderful review :) It makes me so happy to hear that you feel this story can stand on its own. That was definitely my intention when I decided to write it as a sequel. You're right, Lily is very focused on her work and is very detail-oriented... it was fun to have to slip back into her younger self at the thought of Lorcan seeing her all out of sorts! Yay - you liked the fluffy scene! I've always wanted to write fluff...yet somehow my stories always take a dramatic turn hahah (as you have already caught on to with my LOVE of cliffhangers!!) - so this was a fun way to incorporate that. And it's definitely left me wanting to maybe try my hand at fluffy romantic stuff in the future.
Thanks again so much for your very thoughtful review!!


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