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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hi!

Well this certainly is different than anything I've ever read on the archives! Wizarding comic books? They sound interesting! And I'm going to guess with a title like yours, something's going to happen with James and Abigail. Something that seems decidedly exciting!

Although I do admit, the running into him thing was quasi-exciting, and the "Guess who I just ran into?" line was absolutely hilarious. :)

Anyways, I really liked your characters so far, although my favourite has to be Daryl. At this point I'm a little confused as to what I feel for Abigail and Michelle, as they don't seem like very good friends, or even nice friends to each other, but more like acquaintances who awkwardly share a train compartment sometimes, but I'm hoping to see them in a more social aspect so that I can love them more!

The interaction with James was quite funny and I liked how Abigail and he were polite, and how James was extremely apologetic. I like your version of him a lot, and Abigail seems comfortable around him, even if they are in two separate social groups in the hierarchy.

Anyways, I think I've rambled far too much and made far too little sense, but in essence I really liked this and I'm hoping that I get the time soon to come back to this and read the next seven chapters (maybe more if I'm late enough...), because I saw this during NaNo and was really intrigued and now I'm even more hooked!

Superb job!
Lo:)

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Author's Response: Thank you! A lot of people have said that and it makes me happy, I wanted to make a story that had elements of uniqueness in it. Oh something will happen with James and Abigail. :P

Haha I wanted something different to have the two main characters interacting with each other, and what better than someone running into the other and knocking them to the floor. And I couldn't resist James saying that. :P

Aww thank you, I really like Daryl as well. He was fun to write. They're best friends because that's all they've known, but they're not the greatest of friends.

Haha oh James and Abigail! They are fun to write together, I've been having so much fun with those two. I wanted to show James in a different light and I hope I continue to achieve that further into the story.

Awww you can ramble, I love rambling. :D I hope that you enjoy the rest of the story and thank you so much for your kind words! :D


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