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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hey, Amanda! I'm here from my review thread! :)

First of all, I don't know why you're not confident in this! It's absolutely brilliant! Your descriptions and imagery are just phenomenal!

The story makes perfect sense! I have to admit it was a bit jumpy but so was Gilderoy so it suited the one-shot. It all flowed, but the dramatic changes of his behaviour made it feel very real.

The ending tied it together perfectly. It was nice the way you ended it, he was ready to go and he was being a good person (ish). :p

I also loved the title of the book (and the one-shot), 'Playing Pretend'! That was really clever! And I liked that you included that little old lady! It was very sweet!

You also asked about Lockhart's characterisation. I think you have written it fantastically. The way you wrote his deterioration and how he had 'good days' and 'bad days' was so good I can't even articulate how good it was!

This wasn't a very helpful review - mostly just fangirling :p - but feel free to request again!

A definite 10/10 from me!

- Kayla :)

Author's Response: Hey Kayla, thanks for stopping by!

It's great to hear that the jumpiness suited the character and that putting it together piecemeal didn't make it too uneven. I'm also glad that you liked Lockhart's characterization and the details I chose to reveal his story here in his final days.

Thanks again for your kind review :)

-Amanda


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