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Review:marauderfan says:
The last chapter :O

That would be the worst, if children threw tantrums outside your door at work all day long. What a stressful job!

There is something wrong with my eyes today, definitely read that part 'George was juggling for two young children' as 'George was juggling two young children'... lol. Maybe that's why kids throw tantrums at the shop.

I loved the scene with the Potter family dinner. And the way you write Ginny. She's awesome. The family dynamic is so great though, and of course James having to say 'eww' about hand holding, haha

I really didn't want Albus and Brandon to break up, but then once Brandon said his piece it totally made sense. I think it was best for them, and Brandon is totally right - relationships don't last in the long term like that. So it was the right decision. And yay! Albus found time to do things he enjoyed, got to do some soul searching and now he's happy! :D

also, might I add, best ending ever. I really love open-ended endings (i'm really eloquent tonight, aren't I) and this was exactly that. It's happy, but it's not happily-ever-after. More than that, it's real; they still have a long way to go. Awesome job on this fic Rose, I loved it!!

Author's Response: LAST CHAPTER! dun dun DUN.

haha, I didn't think of it like that. Maybe Al is immune to their fits.

Some people juggle geese! (Firefly reference... going, going...) I wouldn't mind someone juggling me if I were a really little kid. uh, nevermind, I'd find it terrifying.

I'm so glad you like the Potter family dynamic. :D They were fun to write about. I wanted to give Ginny a bit of the limelight here as Harry has been mostly active in Al's life in other chapters.

It broke my heart to split them up. I really did agonize over how to do it. I didn't want to just break Al's heart and I couldn't stand making Brandon annoying or do something that would cause a breakup.

I'm so happy you like the ending. I thought bringing them past this point would take a story that moved at a different pace than this one did. I am planning a sequel where i try to bring them together (or bring Al and Brandon back together).

I'm so glad you liked this story!!! it was a fun one to write.

-Rose


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