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Review:PolyJuice_ says:
Blackout Battle ~ Redo 1/2

Aaah, Tammi. You're such a fantastic writer. You're right - I really never read pregnancy stories from the father's point of view so it's really neat you've done this.

So far I'm totally loving where you're going with this story, however I feel like the amount of times Louis and Freya say each other's names makes it awkward. Almost half of their dialogue they're adding in names. I dunno, that might just be me, but I find it breaks up the flow a bit.

I'm really excited to see what's gonna happen to them, the pair of them are already such a cute couple. Aaah *squishes them* I just love your characterization of Louis in particular. You always read about spoiled gorgeous player Louis so this is a nice refreshing change.

Anywho, loved this story, can't wait to read more!

Liz

Author's Response: LIZ! ! !

Aww thank you so much! *blushes* You're awesome!
Thank you so much for your amazingly kind words and for saying that you enjoy the story. :D That makes my day.

Ah, I should go back and have a look at that. I'll edit out some names. :P

Awww you can squish them :D I just love to squish them. :D

I'm so glad that you love my version of Louis, I didn't want him to be spoiled, I imagine him to be more like the Weasley side of the family :D

Thank you so much! I can't wait to see what you think of the rest of the story. :D


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