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Review:randomwriter says:
Hello :) I'm back for the Gry/Sly blackout battle bingo! :D

I missed Jason in this chapter. He is so breath taking, and I know he isn't real, but I've already fallen for him! Maybe I'm falling to his charms, just like Roxxie :S

Anyway, the lack of Jason Turner in this chapter broke my heart a little, but I understand that there are going to be some chapters like this, especially since we are looking at it from Roxanne's point of view.

I really love George and Angelina in this. They are so supportive and warm :) And even though, we don't get to see George's crazy, mischievous side here, I think the whole overprotective father bit falls perfectly in line with his character. I love how he doesn't give her a mouthful for her taking off with Jason. In stead, he's so kind about it, it really made my heart melt :) Angelina too was just so sweet. I do hope there are more chapters featuring them :)

As much as I love the rest, I really really cannot stand Fred, and this must be the first time. All the while, I was just thinking about how he's being such an idiot to Roxxie and it really wasn't fair at all.

The only CC I have is that there are a few punctuation errors in this. Nothing a quick edit can't fix. Another great chapter :) Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Yay! You're back! *dances*

Awww he will make an appearance in other chapters, it upsets me that sometimes he has to be absent from some. Why can't he just follow Roxanne around? :P

Haha don't worry, I've fallen for him too! He is breath taking, I agree with you.

I totally miss Jason.

I'm so glad that you love my characterisation of George and Angelina, I wanted them to be very supportive of their kids. They trust their judgements and want them to make their own mistakes and learn from them. But will be there whenever they're needed.

Oh Fred! I really am not liking him, he's not a nice person in my stories. He is a big idiot! I agree.

I shall go back and make those edits, thank you for pointing them out to me. :D

Thank you once again for such a fantastic review! :D


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