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Review:Teddy1993 says:
You did an absolutely amazing job with the battle. I was actually on the edge of my seat from the very beginning to the very end. There were indeed a lot of casualties, but not more than believable. It did surprise me that James was killed though. I expected both him and Lily to survive, considering the starting point of your story. At least Harry still has his mother. I'm curious to see what you'll do with her.

I liked that you included another little part with Hermione. I'm looking forward to when she'll become more important.

These first five chapters were truly amazing. I have high hopes for the rest of the story. Thanks for writing and sharing this!

Teddy

Author's Response:

Hey Teddy,

Thanks for another review, they mean a lot. It was a surprise to kill off James, but one thing I thought about was that even if they were not ratted out by Pettigrew, it didn't mean both of them would survive.

Glad you enjoyed the battle, it was probably one of the hardest things to write. I'm ok with dialogue, but all out action was more of a challenge. The only thing I might change and edit is to make Pettigrews death a bigger event.

Also glad you enjoyed the Hermione parts, she obviously will have a big part to play in this story.

HolytrinityHRH x


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