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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Hey there, I'm here for Blackout Bingo (20/20)!

Plot/plot arch: This was cute! The introduction set up the setting and whatnot nicely. Christmas at the Burrow by this point in time, I can imagine, would be utter chaos with all of those Weasleys running about. I love that Harry tells Ginny that wants more children, and what I love even more is those names he's picked out. Poor girl, being named Hedwig (though I understand the sentiment). At least if they were to have a boy, his name would be Felix. The ending was particularly sweet ♥ !

Characterization: I think you've pretty much nailed Harry and Ginny, of course, altered slightly to compensate for them being older and having a family. The children are cute, and each seems to have their own individual personality, which is fantastic!

Detail: You've done a great job with adding descriptions in this! Everything comes together to paint some complete images and I think that it ties together nicely.

Emotion: This was sweet, and it definitely made me laugh!

Other/notes: Thanks for the light and fluffy fic! You did an amazing job!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Hi!

Whoop for Blackout bingo :D

Christmas at The Burrow would definitely be a big family affair, I'm certain of it. Poor her indeed, although I suppose Hedwig could be shorted to Heddy, it sounds less weird, lol.

I was a bit wary of Harry and Ginny so thank you!!

Thanks for the review, it made me smile :D

-Potterfan310


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