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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Back for more! (Blackout number 19/20.)

Plot/plot arch: This again has a lot to do with the characters, so I'll leave most of it to the next category. I loved James' interruption in the beginning, it seems like he's a bit jealous (and I use that term lightly) of Lily's friendship with Severus. Severus is beginning to get involved in dark things and bad company, but that doesn't stop him from trying to be close to Lily.

Characterization: Lily and Severus -- The level of comfort that they have with one another is fantastic, their friendship is strong here...for now ;). Lily -- She looks to Severus for friendship, though he's looking for something more. Her distaste for James is spot on. Severus -- He's still mostly all about Lily, which I think is pretty accurate. You've also mentioned some of the people that he hangs out with, who we know are future Death Eaters. There was also mention of a Dark Arts shop, which means that Severus is already dabbling in things that he probably shouldn't.

Detail: This had a bit more detail, but the plot arch made it so that most other descriptors would have been irrelevant, so this was a nice choice.


Other/notes: I hope you plan on updating!

-Rumpel

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