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Review:1917farmgirl says:
Wow, this was very moving, and brought up so many things I'd never thought of.

First of all, I never thought about where everyone would be buried. I really, really like the idea of them all being buried next to each other - the Marauders once more. It's fitting, and very realistic.

It also just crossed my mind, seeing them all together in the end and watching Harry go - I wonder what Tonks and Lily would have thought of each other. There would be quite an age difference, but I think they would have been good friends. They could have talked to each other, commiserated about their husbands' antics.

I like the idea of Harry starting to make piece with all he has lost, and visiting this graveyard is a very good start. And I really love the idea that they are all watching over him. So much love surrounds him, like a protecting shield. I just love it!

And yeah! He proposed! He's finally going to get the family he's wanted so dearly all his life!

Great story! And for a first attempt at Harry I felt like you nailed him. Hopefully you keep writing Harry as I'd love to read more from you.

- Farmgirl

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Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you like the idea of the marauders being buried together =)

And yes Tonks and Lily could have made good friends, who knows!

It takes Harry a while but he finally gets there - he is finally able to accept his losses. I enjoyed writing the bit about them watching over him so I am pleased you liked that.

Thank you once again for all your lovely words =)

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