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Review:1917farmgirl says:
Wow! This was a powerful chapter! And can I just say, one I've been waiting for!

YEAH! Ana finally allowed herself to feel! This line was so heart wrending: "She just left her family for dead. She just wanted to cry. She just wanted her life back." Poor Ana!

I absolutely loved the paragraph where you talked about how she could remember the way the world smelled when the rain stopped, and things like that, but couldn't remember what the fight was about. That is exactly how the mind works in trauma - the unimportant things stick, but the important ones fly away. Such good writing!

I also find it so intriguing that you had Ana NOT let Draco share - that she needed to have him owe her. See, I totally would have let him share a secret and made them all buddy/buddy. You are a much stronger writer than me, sticking to your plot even though it would be easier another way.

And you think of such brilliant things!

I was also amazed at the way you drew a comparison between the two - that Draco also has things he's ashamed of, and he once acted as the coward and ran away.

Nice job!

- Farmgirl

Review 6/20 for Round three of Blackout Battle.

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