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Review:randomwriter says:
Hello :)
I know that I'm yet to review the middle chapters, but I cheated a little bit, sorry! I'll come back and review them later. Promise!

I love how fast the plot is progressing :) Sometimes, it gets really annoying when we need to wait for about ten chapters before the main characters even like each other (assuming they start off as enemies, as is the case here).

I love Jason here as well. He's so dreamy and perfect. I WANT HIM. I DO. And I love how Roxanne is falling for him. Hard. He's so seductive and alluring and she just can't stop herself. But by the look of things, he's just as smitten. I can't wait to find out more.

It's really funny how Roxanne was witty and cutting earlier, but just a few hours with him and she seems to have warmed up to his company. And your last line certainly made MY insides melt. No doubt.

Great chapter :) Looking forward to the next one.

P.S- If I can't have Jason, can I have Winston? He's so cute :)

Author's Response: Hello! :D

That's perfectly fine! I don't mind :P

I wanted it to go quick quickly, I hate when plots drag out and I wanted Jason and Roxanne to be "Bam! Feelings!" :P It's the charm of Jason, it wears a girl's defences down.

Awww you can ask Roxanne if you can share? Oh yeah she is falling for him hard! I think we all are! :D And yes he is just as smitten as she is.

Yes! It's the charm of Jason, she's not happy with herself for falling so quickly for him. So she'll go back to being defensive but we all know that won't last for long. :D

Thank you so much! Haha yes, you can have Winston! :D

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