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Review:TheGirlOnFire says:
I'm back, this is for the blackout bingo 3/20 :)

I like the use of the flashback to tell the story. the contrasting of the good and the bad, all leading to the inevitable end. This is my first Teddy/Dom story and I really liked it. I liked the way you summed up their relationship. The ending was brutal on Dom. I felt like shouting at Teddy to shut up and that he wasn't helping, but in the end he needed to say what he said for the both of them, and that was very good of him. I'm glad they eventually did the honourable thing and broke up. There is a line in which you wrote "continue are...relationship forever..." I think you meant to write "our". Otherwise this is another story of yours that I enjoyed reading.


Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I am pleased you liked the flashback as it was a vital element to present how the Dom/Teddy relationship was, and for the contrast. It's nice that you liked the way I wrote their relationship too, and also how it ended - because after all it was morally wrong. And yes thanks for pointing out that typo about 'our'. I'll edit it later!

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