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Review:TheGirlOnFire says:
Hi again! This is for the blackout bingo 2/20 :)

I really like your writing style, it's very interesting. I haven't read many Narcissa/Lucius stories(I've only read one), this was very good. I liked the fragmentation the snippets of Narcissa's most important moments with Lucius. My favourite would have to be the one at the end. The one where Voldermort dies and they're free. I thought you captured that so well in so little words. I also liked the idea of Harry comingr To their aid and helping them say out of Azkaban. That seems like something that could have happened but was never touched upon in the books. I like the idea that Harry and the Malfoys could make up and be sort of friends. Lucius and Narcissas relationship seems more complex and I think you managed to capture it perfectly in Narcissas seven scenes.

TheGirlOnFirexx

Author's Response: Hey again! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I am happy you like my writing style here as I was somewhat apprehensive about it. I am pleased you liked the fragmentation and that the end was your favourite - it was a favourite of mine too! Yes, I always felt like Harry would have found a way to thank Narcissa and this would've been his way (getting them out of prison). Thanks once again for your lovely words!

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