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Review:marauderfan says:
Um. How are there no reviews on this chapter so far? I just found this story today and I'm a little sad that there's only two chapters because I want more! haha. It's really good! I have read very little from this time period before and I love that you're exploring the lives of these minor characters in the Black family. You've done well writing Walburga, and I like the way you write Alphard! It's easy to tell he's on his way to being disowned, the way he acts inappropriately for a proper member of the Black family.

Fee is an interesting person too. I'm curious what happened to her at the end of the chapter! Aaa! I must say though, I suspect her bloodline is not as pure as she has come to believe - or her friends choose to believe.

Not sure what I think of Tom so far. He seems appropriately distant from people, though I thought he hated his name and by this point was going by Voldemort? Well, I guess no one actually called him Tom in the chapter. I'll have to wait and see haha.

This is a great start! I am so excited to read more!

Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry I've been so bad at updating! I have a strong dislike of editing, so when the first four chapters are edited then updates will be more prompt, I assure you! I'll try to get chapter three up soon :)

I'm really pleased that you're finding Walburga and Alphard realistic so far, and heh, Alphard definitely likes to attract controversy. Fee, too, is surrounded in controvery and mystery :P I will remain tight-lipped about her bloodline, heh.

At present, they've only /just/ graduated. Tom does go by Lord Voldemort when he's around the Death Eaters, although they're not called that yet. He's still a part of wizarding society at present, so although he hates his name, he still has to use it for now.

And thank you so much for your lovely review! :)

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