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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hello again!

Aw! This was so gosh darn cute and I loved it and I loved your characters and I loved how you wrote it and I loved everything about it, and just aw!

Albus was such a sweetie and I think you utterly nailed writing through his POV as a six-soon-to-be-seven year old. His mispronunciation of big words was so darling, and his frowns and how his Grandmother told him it keeps the monsters away was just adorable.

Lexi was a sweetie too, and is it just me or does she like Albus? I don't know if it's the child kind of puppy love, or just that she wants to be his friend, but she is so cute and the interactions she has with Albus are too!

Theo, I'll assume is Theodore Nott, although I could very well be wrong, but anyways, he is so nice and it was great to see how well his relationship with Albus is. And of course, the fact that he calls Lexi his angel, yet Albus still doesn't see it is absolutely adorable as well.

Goodness, this one-shot was just full of aw moments and cuteness and I utterly adored it! Amazing, spectacular job!
Lo:)

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Author's Response: Hello!

Ahh, you read Big Meanie! It's probably one of my favorite things I have ever written... and I've written a lot. :P

Albus is so adorable, I think (because I wrote him, so I'm biased). I just want to hug him all the time, even though he'd hate that unless he could smell the soap. :P

Right now, she doesn't like him or want to be his friend (well, that's what she thinks), she just wants to do as her daddy asked and her daddy asked her to get Albus out of the corner.

Yes, it's Theo Nott. He's awesome, I love him so much, I had to include him. Theo says a lot of things, including Albus being a brat, but deep down I think Albus is his favorite of Harry's family. He pulls a face when he sees the mistletoe, but really he's glad it's Albus Alexa ends up with. :P

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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