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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hello! 'Tis moi, returning!

So I read the sequel to this first, and I came to this second, so hopefully my thoughts will make sense.

ASas;oifhc ;iquwe p;oiur lej . What?!?! I'm so hurt and confused and what is happening, aiohsflijer.

Obviously not...

Anyways, due to my reading of the sequel first, I had already begun to fall for Victoire and sympathize with her tremendously because of the betrayal she felt at the hands of her sister and Teddy. I was quite mad at both Dom and Teddy, although mostly Teddy, so reading this was kind of a roller coaster. Now I utterly despise Teddy, but I sort of have a thing for Dom where I don't hate her... If that makes sense.

I think Dom just needs to have someone to love and when she needed it most, Teddy was there. I utterly loved the flashback, because it was so cute, and reading this through Dom's POV really showed how much she cared for Teddy and absolutely loved him.

Teddy on the other hand, seems quite possessive and indecisive after reading both fics, and I don't think I like him, especially after realizing that he meant to propose to Victoire even as the affair was going on. I also think he's not right in the head, thinking that Victoire kept him sane but Dominique filled a void. If neither of them makes you feel whole, don't stick around! I know that sounds harsh, but honestly, I'm not very fond of your version of Teddy.

That's not to say I didn't like this. I think that you wrote this beautifully and although I'm not fond of the situation, you handled it masterfully and gracefully and I think the relationship between Teddy and Dominique was flushed out and well written.

Kudos and well done!
Lo:)

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Author's Response: Hey! Thanks again =)

Well I am glad you read the prequel to Betrayal as well because it shows Dom's side of the story. Both sisters are hurting equally - sometimes love makes us do crazy things. Teddy is the culprit here though, stupid boy who couldn't get his feelings straightened out.

I am glad you liked the flashback and kinda liked Dom - or at least you didn't hate her anymore as that was my aim.

Teddy is definitely possessive and indecisive. He loves both the sisters and he can't stop himself from trying to get both of them. His orphaned upbringing always made me yearn for real love, and though he got that from Harry and Andromeda and The Weasleys, he never felt like it was enough. (That's my reasoning for his characterisation here xP).

I am not fond of Teddy here either - but it had to be done. Nonetheless I am glad you liked this anyway and felt it was well-written. Thanks!


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