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Review:maraudertimes says:
Hello! Me again!

Constructive criticism? I have one CC. It's rather big though: WHY IS THIS SO SAD?!?!?! Goodness, Teddy and Victoire are one of my favourite ships, and you kind of destroyed them. Excuse me while I cry...

Although I wasn't fond of the whole situation, because of my strange attachment to some of the characters, I do love how you pulled this off. It's absolutely heartbreaking to have Victoire find out such a horrible secret right before the wedding, but that really helped sell the sadness you obviously are trying to convey. And I did love how it was her cleaning up after Dom that lead to the discovery of the letter, because it showed that Victoire suspected nothing and that she trusted the two most important and deceiving people in her life.

Goodness, the end was just painful. I'm totally on Victoire's side, don't get me wrong, but just to see one of my OTPs fall apart was maddening. However, I utterly loved how you wrote it and it was simply beautiful how Teddy seemed to be the perfect fiancee in that moment, but Victoire was standing up for herself. Female Power!

All in all, I have mixed feelings about this, but my biggest one is that you wrote this wonderfully. I can feel what the characters are feeling and I can picture each scene in my head. You did wonderfully!

Great job!
Lo:)

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Author's Response: Hey again!

Aww *hugs* I am sorry this was sad but I like sad (*evil*) xD

I am glad you liked how I wrote this. Victoire definitely didn't suspect a thing - she loved her sister and her fiancé too much.

The ending was heartbreaking but it had to be done - Victoire is a strong independent woman who couldn't accept being treated like this and get back with Teddy.

Thank you for your lovely words!


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