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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 15/20

First off, yes writing intense situations is hard but you totally pulled it off so don't feel so unsure of yourself. It wasn't poorly written and I quite liked it. In fact, the way you handled the sensitivity of this is commendable.

It was quite dark and deep, and very touching. I felt for Arianna and wanted to reach out to her. There was so much emotion in this and you really described it all very well. I also think that her situation was quite realistically portrayed. It was sad but I am glad James finally could help her. I was totally rooting for them and hoping for him to turn up before it's too late.

I also liked your writing style of showing us both perspectives, and the song lyrics were also nicely woven into the narrative making it more effective.

All in all, this was a very well-written piece and I really liked it. I am glad I got a chance to read this!


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