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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hey!

So I'm gutted this is the last chapter I can review but I can always come back another time :)

I would love to know the French phrases that Teddy tried out hahahaha!

Hmm... I don't know what to make of the WCPS... obviously she's just doing her job but Vic has taken a lot of care. It's a tricky situation and obviously they need to make sure Gwyneth is okay. I'm intrigued to where you will take this.

And then you gave us more Teddy and Vic fluff. I love it! More of that please!

Quick typos for you, you put "little angle" instead of "little angel" and "Hofwarts" instead of "Hogwarts"

A few times in this during the story you've gone into present tense which can be a little jarring to read... for example "A few of the potions have been taken away, but she still has not woken up." This should be "A few of the potions had been taken away, but she still hadn't woken up" That is just one example so it might be worth having another quick read through to just fix them up :)

Another great chapter though hun, I've really enjoyed this story so far... you'll be updating this soon right ;) I'll eagerly be awaiting. Seriously though, great characterisation, dialogue and description! Great job!

Lauren :)
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Author's Response: I'm so sorry that the sixth chapter is taking forever to write! I promise that it is, like, half way there, but it's just being a super pain in the brain to write!

Haha, let's just say that he tried some pickup lines once ;).

You're only a chapter away! ;)

Yay! And there will totally be more! :D It's a Vic/Teddy fic of course! ;)

Angle is the angle of a desk, angel is like angelic behavior and the likes ;). As for Hofwarts, I knew that typo was in there, but once I passed it, I couldn't find it anywhere! I forgot what the typo was when I was done xD. Thanks for pointing it out! I'll fix that right up!

My biggest flaw! :( Thank you for the pointer! :)

Soon hopefully! I feel so bad that it has taken so long! D: I seriously love you because you're just ;lak;jdoahd;fjda;lfja AMAZING! :D All the reviews make my day and I hope to not disappoint with the next chapter! :D (When it DOES come!)

~Mae


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