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Review:adluvshp says:
Blackout Battle 9/20

Hey! You're certainly a very talented writer. I absolutely loved the way you wrote this chapter. It had the air of suspense throughout and the descriptions were so intense that I was hooked.

I love the plot of the mystery too. The way we saw it from three different angles was a nice and interesting touch. I am very curious to see how the story progresses. The prologue definitely served its purpose =)

The only CC I'd say is that in some places, things are a little confusing, and the dialogue somewhat awkward to read, but apart from that this chapter was pretty much perfect. I'd say a thorough re-read could help you fix and smooth over the chapter.

Great writing otherwise! I really enjoyed this, and it sets a very promising tone for the rest of the story.

--AD
(AditiDraco95)

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