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Review:FredWeasleyIsMyKing says:
Hey again, I'm back :)

Aww poor Emmaline! I can imagine at her young age going all the way to Paris would seem a disaster! At least Robert can come along. It's cute that she has an imaginary friend, Robert is an usual name for a young girl to pick though, I wonder if there is a reason for that?

I loved the almost fight between Vic and Teddy, it was natural for there to be a bit of tension but I'm glad you let them diffuse it easily. It felt really real and I know I've been in those situations more than once!

I do have one question... if Vic had to wait forty minutes for Van, was she too early or has she made herself really late for work? Just with her being so tired it seemed daft that she'd go in early but also a little odd that she would make herself do late... something to think about anyway.

Oh my goodness, the poor girl! That's so awful! I'm hoping she will have more to come in the story... at least so we can see if she gets better or not. I feel like we will find out more about her anyway.

Another great chapter though, I really enjoyed it. Your attention to detail and characterisation is great! I look forward to more!

Lauren :)
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Author's Response: There's not really a reason for the name other than I couldn't really think of one for the time ;). Though I'd imagine she'd heard it somewhere. Maybe it's the name of a kid at school?

Haha, I'm glad that worked out well. I was afraid I just sort of copped out of making a real fight because by the time I got to that part, I was a little tired already. So to hear you say it worked makes me happy! :)

Vic does what I did in high school. I'd wake up earlier so I can show up earlier. I'd hang out with friends, eat breakfast, have some time to myself. Since she loves work, it's also a chance for her to pick up on any cases that she can get her hands on if she wants them. :)

I know! Poor little one! It was another plot randomly thrown in, but I'm so glad I did! It's grown more into a story now and I love it! I'm glad you want to know more about her! :)

Thank you so so much (again!)! You're simply amazing! That's all there is to it! The absolute best! :3

~Mae


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