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Review:kenpo says:
Hiya! Here for the BvB Battle!

This. Was. Adorable.

I loved it.

I loved you Hannah. I love how she was probably always snarky with her close friends, but after the war that dry humor turned into bitter cynicism.

I also really liked the references to the Golden Trio and how they're in the public eye and the media is always all over them. That's something that I imagine would be really difficult.

I also really loved the way you had Neville understand exactly what she had gone through, and he was able to ask her questions without really saying them. The relationship between people who had this common experience would be really intricate, and it's good that Neville and Hannah ended up together because I'm sure they can help each other through some lingering issues that they have.

It was sweet and good characterisation of Neville that he remembered that Hannah's mom was killed. It shows how thoughtful he is.

The way that Hannah viewed Neville was fantastic. Why was he in Gryffindor?! I think all of us asked that question at some point. He admiration for him shows how much he stepped up into his role as leader during DH.

I loved the back and forth between them. The dialogue and the way Hannah reacted to him (there was that line about how he looked confused, like he did throughout most of school) was brilliant. You did a fantastic job developing two different characters in a really short amount of time.

This was such a pleasure to read!!

Author's Response: Hi! Here I am, several months late, to answer your lovely review!

Thank you so much!! I'm not very good at "adorable," so I'm glad you thought it was!!

Hannah is bitter and snarky, yes. It was really fun to write her like that. Even though she doesn't get all the fame that the Golden Trio does, she still went through the Battle and lost loved ones like they did. Fame or no fame, war tears things apart.

Yes!! Neville understands where she's coming from, and that's why I imagine them slowly becoming friends and then falling in lurve... Because they just GET each other. He's a super-sweet, super-thoughtful guy. Hannah is the main reason why I no longer really ship Neville/Luna--because that's a great ship, but Hannah/Neville is just. So. RIGHT. :)

Yeah, time changes people, but some things never change. Neville will always be slightly confused, and underneath her crusty, bitter shell, Hannah will always be the little girl with pigtails who thought Sirius Black could turn himself into a shrub. :D

Thanks so much for your review!!!

~UnluckyStar57


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