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Review:Ginny says:
This was awesome... again! I loved the little moment between Harry and Ginny at the beginning of this chapter, but then of course Ron has to barge in and cause a scene :) I think you handled the situation that followed quite well. I expected a big fight between the two best friends, but I liked how calm Harry stayed. It shows that he has changed since the Horcrux was destroyed.
I can imagine that Harry wouldn't want to tell his friends about the Horcrux, but of course Hermione is on to something and I think Remus suspects it too. It was a great idea to let Harry be the one to convince Remus not to let anything stand between him and Tonks.
Good scene with Snape. Again, you could easily see that he and Harry get along much better now, but he's still the grumpy, distant man we love ;)
I really liked the final scene with Dumbledore. Although the headmaster is slightly different than in the books, I really like how you write him. He's less secretive and trusts Harry to make his own decisions more. I loved how he compared Harry's situation to Ginny's. In my opinion, that's one of the main reasons Harry and Ginny are so perfect for each other. Ginny is probably the only person who can relate to everything Harry went through. That final line was brilliant. It showed how much Dumbledore still regrets his past and how he wants Harry to avoid making the same mistakes.
By the way, about Cedric making contact with the vampires... I see what you did there!
This story is absolutely amazing. I'm a big fan!

Author's Response: That's more or less what I wanted to show in that fight between Harry and Ron. I'd think that Harry would have more control over his temper now that the Horcrux inside him is destroyed.

Dumbledore is a great character to write. I always have fun with his scenes. And about Cedric, I realize it was a rather lame joke, but I couldn't resist ;)


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