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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi again! :)

I love the chapter image! It foreshadows the chapter perfectly, and is quite funny and English. I like how Harry looks quite distinguished but also a little concerned as well!

I also quite like the tally at the beginning, especially how Harry was planning on running away from home. :P I wonder if the cupboard he was locked in was the one under the stairs? I remember reading that he used to threaten his kids he would lock them there in a prior chapter, which was quite funny.

It was great seeing Ron and Rose and how clearly Ron's kids aren't all that better behaved either. The whole exchange between Rose and Albus made me laugh as well, especially when she just hoped nobody noticed he was "dead." Ron being too tired to try and figure out what Rose was up to made me laugh as well. Also, Ron and Harry made a comment about who James inherited his moodiness from... I think James' ability to hold a grudge reminds me more of his uncle Ron than anyone else! :P

And haha, the ending. I'm glad Harry can outsmart them and even had more dinner ready for James. He should give himself more credit. :P

I'm really loving this and I'm going to favourite it so I'll know if you update! :D This is just such a fun story and reading it really makes me happy. ♥

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Author's Response: Thank you! I had a lot of fun making that chapter image, I can just imagine that being poor James up there, sulking and Harry just having enough of it.

Haha oh the tally! It's so much fun imagining what I can put on the next ones. Poor Harry isn't having a great time with them. Haha that was the cupboard he was locked in. :D

Oh no, Ron's kids aren't as behaved as Ron and Hermione like to believe, if anything they can be worse. Haha Rose isn't exactly the smartest person around, not sure how she would have got away with the 'murder' of her cousin. Haha oh Ron, he just can't be dealing with it all. Oh yeah, James is a lot like his uncle Ron :P

Thank you so much! I shall be updating soon, I've just got to plan what's going to happen in the next chapter. :D Harry might have to take them to work with him.

Your reviews make me happy! :D

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