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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi again! :)

Haha, this was great. I was giggling the whole way through. Their game of Quidditch was quite creative/violent, and it was funny how Harry was okay with it as long as it kept them occupied. I also liked the subtle reference to Ginny taking their brooms as I'm sure it was punishment for some prior mischief. :P

The chocolate bar saga was so funny. Poor Harry, not having a whole bar to himself for all that time! The kids peering in at Harry suddenly startled me as it did him, so you definitely wrote the suspense and sneaking around well. :P And then James going up the drain pipe... so clever! I'm glad Harry got to enjoy his chocolate even though he felt sick after. And James' comment about the chocolate tasting better if it belonged to Harry was so true! It always seems to work that way.

I think the funniest part of the story is the sort of nonchalant but goofy tone of the story, and also just how unapologetically bad the kids are. They're just out of control, but I feel like Harry relates to that and doesn't do much to discipline them at the same time. This suits his canon personality quite well as he was never much of a rule enforcer at Hogwarts and such.

Another wonderful chapter, I loved it! :)

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Author's Response: Hey again! It's good to see you! :D

I always find myself giggling whenever I write this story, those kids get up to some crazy things! Oh yes, the match was clever but violent, I wouldn't want to play at all. Haha, as long as they were out of Harry's hair he didn't mind at all. :P Oh yeah, they get up to a lot of mischief that they get punished for. :P

Poor Harry, he's had to face so much in his life, you would have thought that he could enjoy a bar to himself, but no. Haha I'm sorry that it startled you as well, those are some very sneaky kids! Haha James has his moments.

At least he did get his chocolate, although at a cost. :P

Those kids are so terrible! They just don't care and are quite happy to do what they want without any thought to others. :D I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far. :D

I am absolutely loving your reviews!! :D And Harry isn't good on the discipline, that's why the kids know that once Ginny is gone they can pretty much control Harry. :P

Thank you so much!


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